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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 14:39:41 GMT -5
*gasp* I'M EXCITED! I must know what happens. Write more!
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 14:53:47 GMT -5
OMG, please UPDATE!!!
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 15:04:38 GMT -5
Yeah, I soon as I come up with a way to connect everything. I know what I want to happen, it's just putting it down. I hate writer's block.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 15:06:15 GMT -5
Yeah...I hate writer's block. I'm starting to get it when it comes to my story. I might start a new story and try that multi-tasking thing.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 15:08:14 GMT -5
I was thinking of starting a new one too. Usually, when I do two at once, I get inspiration for the first one from the second one. Everytime.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 15:09:55 GMT -5
Yeah. The only issue with me is that I always confuse the characters. And I do that when I start a story closely after finishing another one. Like I keep wanting to call Nona Morgan in my story. I'm weird like that.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 15:14:09 GMT -5
Well, usually, I use the same characters and change their personality. But I've never used myself before, so it seems kinda wierd.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 15:16:46 GMT -5
Real World was the first one where I actually wrote about myself. And the weird thing was that it was like I just assigned my name to someone else. The character of Dori had very little in common with me. If anything, Chris is more like me.
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 15:24:24 GMT -5
;D, cool story, chris does kinda seem more like you.....
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 15:25:08 GMT -5
Well, me in my story is kinda like me, kinda not. I'm not that nervous. And I SO would have done something if I saw my best friend's girlfriend kissing my ex boyfriend that I just broke up with ten minutes before.
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Post by whatsername on Jul 24, 2005 15:27:41 GMT -5
ok, stop you're yakking and update! pleeeease?
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 15:28:54 GMT -5
lol, who wouldn't?
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 15:30:36 GMT -5
ok, stop you're yakking and update! pleeeease? I'm obviously not the only person with no patience. But update it! (me being demanding again)
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 18:15:15 GMT -5
Ah! Okay, okay, updation. (I like that word.) P.S. Bad case of writer's block. If it sucks, sorry.
Part 12 REGULAR POINT OF VIEW That had to be it! They had never broken up! That’s what all the hullabaloo was about! And Tre must know. But I still didn’t figure out the connection between this and pretending to be his girlfriend was about. But then wait! If they were still together, why did they stage this breakup? This wasn’t making sense to me at all…
ADRIENNE’S POINT OF VIEW “So, you’re not backing out on me, are you?” I asked Billie, putting on my puppy dog face. He shook his head. “No. But, really, think about this. It could really fuck the both of us up.” “Well, you’ll take care of that, won’t you?” “How?” “You’re smart, figure it out. Now, the bell’s gonna ring soon, so let’s go inside. And you can’t keep coming up to me like this, it’ll start to get suspicious.” We began to walk back into the cafeteria. “My sweet revenge, will be MINE, it’s in the making, it’s in the taking, making…” I looked to Billie. “Sing with me!” “Baking,” he said unenthusiastically. “Taking,” I continued. “Faking,” he sighed. “You’ll be fine. Just stick to it, and you’ll be fine,” I reassured as I headed off to Mike’s table. It damn well better be fine. I swear, if he fucks this up…..
BILLIE JOE’S POINT OF VIEW I wasn’t gonna do it. Ain’t no way, ain’t no how. I may love Adrienne, but not enough to…well…you know. (To readers: It’s killing you, isn’t it?) So! I had to figure out a way to get myself out of this. I was busy contemplating this, when I ran straight into Nye. “Oh, sorry…” I apologized. “Oh, that’s quite alright!” The bell rang. “Oh, there’s the bell, gotta go!” And she hurried away. To Tre. I noticed that he looked around, then took her hand. They walked hand in hand out of the cafeteria. Hold up. When did that happen? If we just broke up fifteen minutes ago, and Nye told me that having a boyfriend was too stressful at the moment, why was she with Tre? Oh, Adrienne was not gonna like this. Hell, I don’t like it. What’s up with that? Maybe that’s the real reason she broke up with me, so she could date Tre. Or, there was even the possibility that I was two-timed. That was fucked up! Hm, kinda like what you and Adrienne are planning, eh? Oh yeah. I didn’t have room to talk. I really didn’t want to do it. But if I wanted Adrienne to be happy….
TRE’S POINT OF VIEW Hm, I think the only person who’s happy and carefree is Mike. Poor guy.
THIRD PERSON So, another week passed by. Tre and Nye were still “dating”, Adrienne still had her claws sunk deep into Mike, all while still having rendezvous with Billie Joe. Then, that fateful night came, in which Billie had told Adrienne that he was going to do “his job”……
REGULAR POINT OF VIEW I looked to Mike, who was laying on his bed, watching me brush my hair into a ponytail. “So, let me get this straight. You and Billie are no more. Yet he calls you and tells you to come to his house, because it’s ‘important’?” “Yeah, that’s about right.” “Fishy.” “Well, I don’t trust him for a minute,” I confirmed. “Why?” “I just don’t.” I couldn’t tell him the real reason. Tre and I had agreed to keep Mike as clueless as possible. What he didn’t know wouldn’t hurt him. Besides, the way Adrienne had him whipped, I doubt he’d believe me. I picked up Mike’s keys from the dresser. “Thanks for letting me borrow your car.” “No prob.” “Any plans for while I’m gone?” He shook his head. “Adrienne’s busy, so none.” No comment. “See ya.” And I was on my way. TRE’S POINT OF VIEW 7:30. I had to go now. I knew all about Billie’s plan to get Nye alone now. Adrienne may be devious and tricky, but she doesn’t know how to whisper. Quickly, I ran out the door and down the street. I’d be less obvious without a car, and Billie Joe’s house was only a 10 minute walk. For some reason, I felt like Superman, going to save Lois (I hope that’s how you spell it. If not, correct me.) from some dangerous plight. “Never fear, for Tre is near!” I belted out into the night air.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 19:37:07 GMT -5
Awwww....so cute. I <3 Tre.
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