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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 19:44:21 GMT -5
lol, " for never fear, tre is near!" lol, priceles, anyway please update
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 21:38:08 GMT -5
Well, enjoy the cuteness while it lasts. This next chapter completely screws everything poor Tre wanted to do. Part 13 REGULAR POINT OF VIEW I rang the bell of Billie Joe’s house, wiping my hands on my jeans quickly. Great, we were back to this. The door was opened by a red-eyed Billie Joe. He looked as if he had been crying. I stepped inside. “Billie, what’s the matter?” Even though I wasn’t too happy with him right then, I still hated to see anyone cry. He closed the door and looked me dead in the eye. “You. You are the matter.” I frowned. “Huh? I don’t think I under-“ I was cut off by him grabbing me, pressing my body against his and kissing the living shit out of me. BILLIE’S POINT OF VIEW No, I wasn’t going through with Adrienne’s plan. You know that old, slightly corny saying, “You don’t know what you got till it’s gone.”? Well, it applies here. It took me a year and a half to realize that Adrienne doesn’t give a shit about me. It took me a year and a half to realize that she was only using me in her devious schemes because I was such a good scapegoat. Yet it only took me two weeks to realize that I was in love with a girl who was pretty, sweet, funny…I could go on. But I won’t, for your sake. “Billie, what was that?” she asked once I let her breathe. “Nye, you’d better sit down. This is a long story.” She plopped down on my couch, since no one else was home, it was okay that we just sat there. But then, there was a banging sound as Tre burst through the front door. “Billie Joe Armstrong! I have caught-“ he finally realized that there was nothing going on. “Well, hello Tre! You’re just in time for Tales from the Crypt!” Nye joked. TRE’S POINT OF VIEW HUH? What was happening? Why wasn’t…but I thought…Adrienne said…. “You mean…you’re not gonna…” “No! Now if you’ll sit down and shut up, I’ll tell you the whole story,” Billie said. I plopped down on the floor. Great. I had my big chance to prove myself, and I blew it. Not that I had a reason or anything. I certainly didn’t like Nye for real. And I certainly wasn’t trying to impress her. Not at all. Who was I kidding??
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 21:44:26 GMT -5
UPDATE AGAIN! Sorry if I'm being annoying. This is good stuff, though.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 21:56:19 GMT -5
I'm coming, I'm coming. The next part will be longer too, since I have to do a history and all.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 21:57:39 GMT -5
Oooh...history. As long as school's not involved, history is good with me.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 22:06:40 GMT -5
I hear ya. Trust me, no school.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 22:10:07 GMT -5
Good. School starts for me two weeks from tomorrow. Gah.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 22:18:07 GMT -5
Two weeks? That soon? Damn, summer went by fast. I'm probaly starting soon too.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 22:22:05 GMT -5
Yeah. God, only two weeks left of summer. Stupid school.
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trish
American Idiot
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Post by trish on Jul 24, 2005 22:24:51 GMT -5
Pllleeeeeeeeez write more its great!!!!!!
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 22:27:13 GMT -5
Why thank you! I'm working on it. In fact, if I'm not on the Internet, it'll be easier. I'll be back.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 25, 2005 21:12:17 GMT -5
Updation.
Part 14 REGULAR POINT OF VIEW “Alright, Beej. Explain everything.” This was gonna be interesting. And it would be nice to know why he had kissed me so brutally. “I hope you’re comfortable.” He took a deep breath. “Hm, where to start...Okay, so in middle school, did you know a girl named Adrienne?” I already knew where this was going. “Unfortunately.” “Well, the Adrienne then and the Adrienne now is the same person.” “No shit.” He nodded. “Yes, shit. So then, when she-“ His cell phone rang at that moment. “Uh-oh.” He mumbled when he looked at the caller ID. “It’s her, isn’t it?” I asked. He nodded. Tre almost laughed. “How convenient.” Billie Joe answered the phone, motioning for us to shut up. “Hello?”
ADRIENNE’S POINT OF VIEW “Billie! So are you done yet?” I asked, lowering the loud music in my room. “Uh, done? Oh yeah! Done! Yeah. Just finished,” he stuttered. I smirked. “Good. Mike and I will be right over.” “Over?? Wait, I don’t think-“ “Be there soon!” And I hung up before he could protest some more. He must think I was stupid. As if I couldn’t tell he was lying through his teeth. After calling Mike and telling him that I would be there soon, I turned the music back up and began singing along. Hm, this song could give you ideas…. “Poisoning a drink, bleeding in a sink, choking with a link, killing with a stink, just your mother’s ho…” I smiled as I hit the chorus. “My sweet revenge, will be MINE, for the taking, it’s in the making, baby….” I slipped a baggy of a powdery substance into my pocket. Oh yes, revenge will be mine, baby.
Sorry so short. I have brainstorming to do.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 25, 2005 21:17:58 GMT -5
It was short, but good.
I WANNA KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON!!!!!!!!!!! I'm as confused as Nye (in the story).
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 25, 2005 21:19:52 GMT -5
Well, that' s good to know. That was the point. But hey, I'm starting to get writer's block, so I'll do my best.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 25, 2005 21:22:43 GMT -5
NO!!!!!!! ACCURSED WRITER'S BLOCK! Anyway, good luck getting over it.
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