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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 29, 2005 20:52:37 GMT -5
I'm sorry, I don't intentionlly try to leave people hanging...I just stop writing when I feel like it.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 29, 2005 22:20:06 GMT -5
*sigh* The time has come...for the last updation.
Part 20 THREE WEEKS LATER REGULAR POINT OF VIEW Wow, it was good to be out of that hospital. I regained full mobility, and except for the occasional episode since I had had such a huge dosing, I would suffer no long term effects. Billie Joe was walking me to his car, when I heard a voice say behind me, “Nye! Wait!” I turned, and saw Mike. He was dressed normally, so obviously he was being released that same day. Billie Joe had told me that he was in the hospital too. Guess Adrienne got mad at him or something. I know I probably should have turned and walked the other way. Maybe I should have told him off right there in the middle of the parking lot. But instead, what did I do? I ran to him and practically tackled him in a tight hug. He hugged me back just as tight. “I’m sorry, Nye. I’m so sorry.” “Damn you Mike! Why is it that I can’t ever stay mad at you?!” I demanded. “Because I’m so cute.” “Hmph.” I pushed him away from me. “Not even near death experiences can change you.” “Aw, this so heartwarming. It brings a tear to my eye…” Billie Joe joked, pretending to wipe a tear away. “Anyways, you know, you’re still welcome at my house, anytime you want to get away from your people…” Mike said quietly. “Thank you. I’ll be there later. Who’s coming to pick you up?” I asked. “My mom. You can come with us…if you’re not busy…” I glanced at Billie Joe. “Later.” He looked in between us. “I thought you two broke up?” Billie put his arm around me. “That was BEFORE she almost died.” Mike nodded. “I see. His mom’s car pulled up then. After a tête-à-tête, they drove away, leaving Billie and I alone in the parking lot. “Ready?” he asked. “Of course.” We strolled hand in hand the rest of the way to his car, hopped in, then drove away.
ADRIENNE’S POINT OF VIEW Tre and I were watching all of this from in his car, parked in a corner of the parking lot. He sighed deeply. “Something the matter?” I asked. He shook his head. “Nothing.” It was quiet for a minute. “Hey, Tre?” He looked at me. “Hm?” “When we made this deal…you did mean that it would last, right?” He looked at me for a minute. “Yeah.” I smiled slightly and held out my pinky. “To the end?” He seemed to hesitate, but soon grabbed my pinky with his own. “To the end.” My smile broadened, and he smiled back. As we began driving, I turned the CD player up and switched the song to Revenga. Both Tre and I sang along, but when I hit the chorus, I lowered my voice, “My sweet revenge, will be MINE…” The deal was that he could take Mike to the hospital. Nothing was ever said about me not finishing the deed.
THE END!!!!! Look for the sequel, which will be entitled, “Revenga.” Tootles!
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 29, 2005 22:45:22 GMT -5
YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!!! Arggg....I mean, it was good, but.....CLIFFHANGERS!
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 29, 2005 23:12:37 GMT -5
Ah! But that is what the sequel is for!
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 29, 2005 23:44:34 GMT -5
When will you be writing the sequal?
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Post by TABBY on Jul 30, 2005 10:16:04 GMT -5
CLIFFHANGER!!,i loved it!, please write the sequal soooooon
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trish
American Idiot
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Post by trish on Jul 30, 2005 17:12:49 GMT -5
you have to write a sequal!!!! its improtant. lol
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 30, 2005 20:11:53 GMT -5
It's about to be posted...now.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 30, 2005 20:14:12 GMT -5
Yay!!!!
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 8, 2005 18:11:12 GMT -5
WOW..... O.O that was SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It got a little confusing in parts (especially with everyone breaking up but not but thne breaking up for real and then like five-timing them.... lol....) but SOOO AWESOME. awesome is not even a good enough word for it.............!!!
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 8, 2005 18:12:38 GMT -5
WOW..... O.O that was SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It got a little confusing in parts (especially with everyone breaking up but not but thne breaking up for real and then like five-timing them.... lol....) but SOOO AWESOME. awesome is not even a good enough word for it.............!!!
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