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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 23, 2005 20:18:43 GMT -5
yes, actually, I take great pleasure in it.. *evil grin* lol.... i hate cliffhangers too! in any fanfics I would read, if there was a cliffhanger, I would be like "DFJDKLJEIURIJDSFKJ HOW COULD THEY DO THIS TO ME?!?!" lol.. but I don't hate tehm so much when I write them =)
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 24, 2005 17:30:27 GMT -5
lol =) its basically just like random excitement.. lol
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Post by TABBY on Oct 24, 2005 20:01:54 GMT -5
randomness is fuuuunnnn!!!
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 24, 2005 20:21:33 GMT -5
I'LL SAY! (lol sorry inside joke between me and a friend)... YAY you're going to be a character tabby! lol.... AHHHH you don't find billie attractive? I'm sorry.... I'm so shocked! wait ARE you going to be a character?! lol we kind of got side-tracked
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Post by TABBY on Oct 25, 2005 5:45:38 GMT -5
wait what?
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 26, 2005 17:42:01 GMT -5
lol.. tabby, ARE you going to be a character in my story? or no? (i dont mind if you don't want to be with billie, lol)
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 26, 2005 18:02:31 GMT -5
Part 5: in which a porcupine becomes infamous, but Billie ends up with nothing more than questions[/b] “Navy?! What the heck were you doing in the abandoned church?” Billie asked me, and he sounded mad. All the hyperness that the sugar had induced was gone. “I---I--Well, I--” I stammered. “I just heard something in there. I was out waiting for you, and I heard something rummaging around in there. I thought it might be a robber or whatnot. Or maybe just an injured porcupine..” I smiled, and laughed nervously. “See Billie? she just wanted to save a cute little wee porcupine from a horrible death!” said the guy who I believed was Tre. Billie laughed. “Yeah..poor porcupine..”he said. “His name is Cornelius! “Tre said, referring to the now-infamous porcupine. Billie’s POV We all got into my car, and began the drive to school. My mind wandered as I drove through the streets. Navy and Tre kept looking at each other, but then quickly looking away. Why would Navy lie to me? I thought. We arrived at PVHS, and Navy hopped out of the car with nothing more than a slight wave to me before entering the school. I sighed. We’ve known each other for approximately 19 hours. Why would I expect her to tell me anything? Regular POV I flicked my wrist gently to the right, pulled up, and my locker opened. I haphazardly threw my books in there, with no regard for their place, and grabbed my Biology textbook. Someone came up behind me and slammed my locker shut. “Do you realize you could’ve seriously injured me? I mean, does that fact not register any sympathy in you at all?” I said to whomever had closed my locker. I turned around to face the perpetrator, and saw none other than Tre’s face. “Why did you come and shut my locker on this beautifully tragic morning?” I asked him. He looked around nervously, and cleared his throat. “ Oh..right.. about that.. in the car this morning.. I, I---just thanks.” “You live there, don't you?” he spat out. “Live where?” I replied, acting as if I didn’t have a clue to what he was talking about. “In that old church? The on on 93rd?” “Look, Tre---’ I began to say, but the bell interrupted me. That certainly did seem to be happening to me a lot since I came to Pinole, didn’t it? Tre’ gave me a look, and walked away. I feel (not painfully) against my locker, and yet another sigh escaped my lips. Billie’s POV I turned my back to Navy. I had seen her. And I had seen Tre’ too. But I hadn’t heard what they were saying; I hadn’t been close enough for that. What is going on? --------------------------------------- Did you like it? Let me know!! lol, I’m dying to hear from you guys! I have a break from school this week, so I know I’ll be writing more.. [/font][/size]
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Post by TABBY on Oct 26, 2005 18:03:04 GMT -5
i'll be in the story. But it would be cool if i could be hooked up with tre in any sort. If you can't think of anything and get writers block with that idea. Its cool. I just feel honored to be in the story lol. (just one thing........don't me hyper an annoying.....im not like that.....im not......stop laughing.....)
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 27, 2005 17:19:14 GMT -5
lol =) mk.. I wont.. lol.. darn!! i was gonna have her be like that.. wut about just snotty and rude? (wait.. that came out wrong.. i DO NOT think you are like that... just the character in the story has to be hated) =)
-did you like part 5?
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Post by TABBY on Oct 27, 2005 17:45:32 GMT -5
yes ;D. snotty and rude?!?!?!?!
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 27, 2005 19:14:08 GMT -5
NO!!!!!!! YOU ARE NOT SNOTTY AND RUDE. your CHARACTER will be snotty and rude..YOU.ARE.NOT.SNOTTY.AND.RUDE. lol you guys are going to break up anyways... =)
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Post by TABBY on Oct 27, 2005 21:05:24 GMT -5
thats not good either..........i would rather not be snotty and rude and still stay together....or not....just please not snotty in rude.....(sorry im really picky lol)
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 28, 2005 13:23:49 GMT -5
lol..... but..but.. i need you to be hated!! hmm.. i will have to think about your character
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Post by whatsername on Oct 28, 2005 15:10:02 GMT -5
lol, tabby is really loving this.
i would love to live in a church like that, that'd be awesome!! luvs it!
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Oct 29, 2005 15:11:06 GMT -5
lol... the church is not so cool.. why do you like it?
but yeah... the church is ACTUALLY a REAL place in my town!! its all like abandoned and such.. i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove using real places and settings in my stories...
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