trish
American Idiot
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Post by trish on Aug 2, 2005 14:59:44 GMT -5
i love your stroy but addie is insane!!!!
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Post by billiejoeroxmysox on Aug 3, 2005 15:49:46 GMT -5
Does anyone have any pictures of Adrienne coz i've never seen her and i'm curious to know what she looks like. Anyway, that was completely off subject. YOUR STORY ROCKS!!! Update please!
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Aug 3, 2005 18:43:58 GMT -5
Heh, that was the point, to make her crazy. But, I have no problem with her in real life. Updation.
Part 5 TRE’S POINT OF VIEW I was awakened at 12:30 on Sunday by my phone ringing quite loudly. I picked it up and checked the caller ID. Adrienne. I heaved a great sigh before I picked up. “Hello?” My voice was about five tones lower than usual and my spit tasted really nasty. “Tre? Damn, what happened to you?” “You woke me up,” I replied. “Oops. Oh well, you’re awake now. There is something that we need to discuss,” she said. Uh-oh. “Pertaining to what?” “Well…how about you come over later…when you don’t sound like you’re in a mine,” she suggested. “Whatever.” We hung up and I flopped back down onto my pillow. Whenever Adrienne said we needed to discuss something, it was never good. Then again, maybe it would be good. Maybe she would break up with me. I’ve been hanging around her wayyyyyyyyyyy too much. How do I know? I know every word to Revenga, and find myself singing it on random occasions. That has GOT to stop.
REGULAR POINT OF VIEW It was so good to be back at my dad’s house. He had come to get me right before he went off the work, so I was out of there about noon. I wasn’t expecting him back until after eight, so Billie was gonna come over. Heh heh. He arrived about 2:30 that afternoon while I was sitting and watching reruns of the Rugrats. “Hello there,” he greeted, sitting beside me. “Hi.” It was silent for about a minute. “Wanna go to my room?” I asked, already standing up. “About time!” Well…when the cat is away, the mice will play.
ADRIENNE’S POINT OF VIEW Alright, I had practiced my speech, and I think I had it down now. So when Tre got there later on that afternoon, I was ready. “So, what is this thing that we must discuss?” he asked, sitting on my bed. “Well…Tre…I know that before, you know, that episode a few months ago, that Nye, Mike, and Billie Joe were among your best friends…” I began. He frowned. “And…?” “And, I know that you miss them,” I continued. He nodded. “Yeah…” “So…I think that you should try to…reconcile.” “What??” he asked. “Yes, I said it. Just because we made a deal doesn’t mean that you have to be miserable,” I went on. “Why? Why are you all of a sudden eager to make me reconcile with them?” he asked. Uh-oh, he was getting suspicious. “I know, I know, you’re thinking that this is just another one of my crazy plans. But I promise that it’s just to help you, because I care about you.” Damn, I was lying. He still wasn’t convinced. “What’s in it for you?” I shrugged. “Who knows? Maybe they’re forgiving souls.” He thought for a minute. “Well…if you promise that it’s not one of your crazy plans, then I guess it’s okay. I’ll try.” I nodded. “Cool, I guess…” Suddenly, I didn’t feel to well. “Are you okay?” Tre asked. I shook my head. “No!” I dashed out of my room and down the hall, where I threw my breakfast, tea, lunch, and dinner up into the toilet. “Adrienne, are you okay?” I gagged violently and shook my head. This was odd. I was fine a few minutes ago…sure, I was sick occasionally in the mornings, but that always went away. Maybe I ate something.
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Post by TABBY on Aug 3, 2005 20:11:16 GMT -5
ha ha, she threw up lol, i like that lol, makes me feel good, because well in the story she is a real bitch, lol, anyway please update (by the way if addie ever reads this please note that i hate the addie in the story not the REAL addie so don't egt offended
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Post by billiejoeroxmysox on Aug 4, 2005 7:27:14 GMT -5
Wouldn't that be weird if she did read this? A story about her being a complete and utter nutcase? If i were her i'd be slightly scared...
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jnav1
American Idiot
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Post by jnav1 on Aug 4, 2005 9:56:29 GMT -5
true very true.
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Post by billiejoeroxmysox on Aug 4, 2005 11:08:54 GMT -5
Hee hee i love your avatar. It's so freaky. Anyway, i'm wandering off subject again. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please.
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trish
American Idiot
Posts: 48
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Post by trish on Aug 4, 2005 12:31:43 GMT -5
Ya! update its great...and hopefully addie won't read this...that'd be crazy
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Aug 4, 2005 20:26:23 GMT -5
o0o0o, I ho[e to God she doesn't....But I have absolutely NO problem with her in real life, she was just the charater I decided to use. NO worries. Updation.
Part 6 (I think) MIKE’S POINT OF VIEW When I arrived at school Monday, I waited at the lockers for Nye. “For once, you’re the one waiting,” she remarked as she opened her locker. I snorted. “Whatever. So, how are things with your dad?” “Okay, I guess. We don’t really talk much, but whatever. I don’t know, I’m thinking about moving in with him full time or something.” “But your mom has custody. You just visit him for two weeks every other month. You would have to go through a whole court deal…” I told her. She shrugged. “It’s worth the trouble. Like I actually stay at Mom’s house anyway.” We began walking toward our homerooms. “Point.” We walked the rest of the way in silence. She waved before she turned into her room, and as I walked the 10 or so feet to mine, I saw Adrienne and Tre down the hall, talking with their heads together. Yeah, she almost tried to kill me. And don’t worry, I don’t have a thing for her. But a little nostalgia is okay, right?
TRE’S POINT OF VIEW “So, you’re sure you’re okay?” I asked Adrienne. “For the last time, Tre. I said I’m fine. Please, you know I wouldn’t be here if I didn’t feel good anyway. Since when do I want to come to school?” she shot back. I nodded. “Point.” Then I sighed. “So…when again?’ “Tre, you be the judge. You have second period with Nye, so why don’t you start there?” I nodded. “Alright. Well, see you at lunch.” She nodded. “See ya.” And off she went to her homeroom. I frowned. Usually, she insisted on shoving her tongue down my throat before going off to any class. Not that I was complaining or anything. Nope, not me. I turned and began walking in the other direction. “Poisoning a drink, bleeding in a sink, choking with a link…” I muttered, then shook my head. “That has got to stop.”
ADRIENNE’S POINT OF VIEW Okay, so maybe I lied. I wasn’t feeling okay. But I would be fine; it was nothing serious, I’m sure. I mean, what could it be? I knew I wasn’t pregnant, because the last time I had sex was…damn, I don’t even know when. I don’t think I had eaten anything strange, nor drank. My stomach lurched painfully at that moment. Maybe I just had a weird stomach virus. I non-conspicuously took my seat next to Mike, who was moving his head slightly to the music in his headphones. I decided to wait until Mr. Lang was done talking before I decided it was now or never. I lightly tapped his arm. “Mike?” He looked, then took his headphones off. “Huh?” I winced. He didn’t exactly sound like Mr. Rogers welcoming me into his neighborhood, so maybe this would be harder than I originally thought. “Look, I know that I’m probably the last person that you wanna see right now, but…” I paused to make sure that he was still paying attention. “Yeah…?” he prodded. “Look, all I want is for you to say that you don’t hate me.” I thought I was doing a good job of sounding like I was sorry. He looked at me for a long moment. “I don’t hate you. I never did hate you.” Then he went back to his music. I turned around in my desk and smiled. Now we were getting somewhere. I was just about to turn around and say something else, but then the room began spinning. I tried to stand up to get out of there, but all I remember was the floor getting closer to my face.
REGULAR POINT OF VIEW It was right before second period, and I noticed that there was a big hullabaloo going on around Mike’s homeroom. Being the pessimist that I am, I automatically assumed that something had happened to Mike. I grabbed Billie Joe’s hand and pulled him over to where the crowd was. Luckily, I spotted Mike’s tallish form kinda at the back of the crowd. Billie and I dashed up. “What’s going on?” Billie asked. I looked around. There were medics and everything. “What happened?” “Adrienne. She passed out at the end of class and slammed her head on the ground. It doesn’t look good. I mean, you could hear her head crack when it hit the ground. I made a face. “Ew….” “She passed out? What happened to her?” Billie Joe asked. Mike shrugged. “She looked fine. A bit pale, but fine.” Mr. Lang walked out of the classroom just then. “Okay, back to class, there’s nothing to see here!” But unfortunately, he had bad timing, because that’s right when the medics rolled Adrienne out of the stretcher. And naturally, everyone started still. She didn’t look that bad, just a huge gash on the side of her head. As they rolled her down the hall toward the front door, the three of us exchanged glances. As the good citizens that we are, we couldn’t help but be just a bit concerned. “Is it wrong to feel sorry for her?” Billie asked. I shrugged. “Who knows.” Mike just stayed quiet, his eyes following the stretcher all the way down the hall.
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Post by TABBY on Aug 4, 2005 21:03:23 GMT -5
ha ha ha ha, she cracked her head!!!! lmao, HOPE YOUR HAPPY BITCH!!!!, ok , now that wa really cold......i'm really into your story lol, anyway please update
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Aug 4, 2005 21:12:37 GMT -5
Ooooo, write more please.
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trish
American Idiot
Posts: 48
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Post by trish on Aug 4, 2005 22:05:12 GMT -5
ya... its great you have to update.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Aug 4, 2005 22:59:32 GMT -5
Ah, I will. Just now, I wanna delete the whole thing for a paranoid feeling that Adrienne's gonna read this.
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Post by billiejoeroxmysox on Aug 5, 2005 8:44:49 GMT -5
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Don't do that!!! She won't read it!! What would she want with websites like this anyways??? She's probably too busy to be on the internet 24/7!! She has kids to look after!! She won't read it!!!!!!!!!
DON'T DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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jnav1
American Idiot
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Post by jnav1 on Aug 5, 2005 13:41:39 GMT -5
Yea, i don't really think shes on as much as me and many others who devote their life,lol, to the community of the internet. So PLEASE don't delete it!!!!!!!!!! All of us who really are reading it want it to stay.
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