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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on Nov 28, 2005 21:20:44 GMT -5
Yeah.....I get that feeling all the time....like when I read over something I've written a long time ago, I remember how I was feeling when I wrote it, or what music I was listening to, or where I was when I wrote it.....*walks memory lane*
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Nov 28, 2005 21:26:22 GMT -5
yay memory lane! yeah.. I look back at my handwritten part 1 and 2, and tehy are so.. different from now! I dono.. I want to say amateur, but it really wasn't that long ago that I wrote them..
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on Nov 28, 2005 21:30:09 GMT -5
lol.....writing developes as you continue doing it......I looked at some stuff I wrote earlier in the year, and I went, "Wow, I sucked!" But it's good to see how much you've progressed through writing.....
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Nov 28, 2005 21:46:39 GMT -5
yeah.. exactly!! I read that stuff, and realized taht I didn't have hardly any of the story planned out! When I began then, he wasn't going to be hit by a car, or Navy lie to him, or.. a boatload of other things that I can't remember right now, lol
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on Nov 29, 2005 7:08:59 GMT -5
Ditto. And he wasn't going to be hit by a car? Hm. I wonder how the story would've turned out then. See? It's interesting to think about that sort of stuff.
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Nov 29, 2005 17:53:38 GMT -5
lol.. ACtually, the story would've been loads more boring... so aren't you glad I get hit by those random ideas? lol
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on Nov 29, 2005 18:30:20 GMT -5
Yes, actually, I'm VERY glad.
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Post by [...whatsername3...] on Nov 29, 2005 20:31:48 GMT -5
ME TOO!! **holds up hand for high-five**
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on Nov 29, 2005 20:52:01 GMT -5
*high fives ya*
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Post by rockandrollmyworld on Jan 4, 2006 18:56:51 GMT -5
Dammit, you made me cry! But, anyway, I really liked your story, and now it's one of my favorite Green Day fanficsc, so congratulations! Hmm, although there might have been a grammatical error in the first part (but I am a grammar nerd, so please don't hurt me for saying that), but aside from that, it felt perfect to me. It never felt plain unrealistic, it kept me very involved (in fact, you resulted in me staying up until 3:00 in the morning, when it occurred to me that I had been stairing at my laptop in utter contentment for over and hour) and it was well-written.
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Post by greendayzmyidol on Jan 16, 2006 21:48:25 GMT -5
That...wow.... i just read the whole thing today... i dont even know what to say... i cried so many times and im not afraid to admit it lol.... The ending was happy/sad ... yeah no... i cried there...it was....oh my god.. i cant...just .... WOW! lol your an awesome, intelligent writer.....like wow!... lol I think thats all i can say is WOW!! lmfao
-Courtney
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Post by luu on Jan 9, 2007 19:00:38 GMT -5
[[shadow=black,left,300]glow=red,2,300]WOW. this thing was fucking awesome ;D .lol. and i have to admit it , i cried , A LOT  .it made me sad the idea of billie being abused by his stepdad, but the ending was amazing  . and i read the comments about different ways of killing steve ;D.[/glow][/shadow] |
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Post by sadiexgreen13 on Jun 19, 2007 11:33:01 GMT -5
I read this and I almost cried.
It's awesome, so is pretty much all of you're other work.
I love it!
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Post by IStoleUrUsername on May 7, 2015 19:21:04 GMT -5
This is amazing! Continue! Please!
What would happen if Billie were sick I wonder....?!
Muahahhahahaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please *Puppy Eyes*
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.it made me sad the idea of billie being abused by his stepdad, but the ending was amazing 
. and i read the comments about different ways of killing steve ;D.[/glow][/shadow]