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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 8:21:21 GMT -5
As soon as I get back from church (which will be God knows when), I'll update again.
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 8:24:08 GMT -5
yay............lol
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 12:35:41 GMT -5
Er...I have a minute to be on the computer before I have to go. Turns out I have a packed day. I won't be home until 8:30 tonight. And it's currently 1:36 PM (so do the math for whatever time zone you're all in). Anyway, I'll update later tonight.
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 13:22:47 GMT -5
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 14:27:22 GMT -5
Oh shoot. Sundays are always slow where I am.
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 14:54:20 GMT -5
lol, same
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 14:56:34 GMT -5
I have an hour. So here goes the next part. PART TWENTY SEVEN REGULAR POINT OF VIEW "Are you okay?" Tre asked as I collapsed on his bed. "For someone who's father is wanted in not only America but Europe too, I'm as good as can be expected," I sighed. He climbed onto the bed next to me and stretched out, laying one arm across my stomach. "Well, it's not expected that you'd be very good. Does that mean you feel like shit?" "Pretty much," I mumbled. "God, my dad killed someone." "I know," he murmured. "It was bad enough that he was dating her or whatever they were doing. But then he raped and killed her," I whispered. "It's so unreal, you know?" "Yeah," Tre nodded, although he didn't know, as much as he may have thought he knew what I was going through or whatever. I kissed him on the cheek. "Thanks for not freaking out," I said. "No problem," he smiled. "So, when they arrest your dad or whatever, which you know they will, what are you going to do?" "The same thing I'm doing now," I told him. "Spending time with you and crashing at Nona's house." He laughed. "Speaking of Nona's house, it's almost ten. Shouldn't you be getting home soon?" "Probably," I sighed. "Sarah will freak out otherwise. I have an idea. Since I spend the night here all the time, why don't you come over to Nona's house." "Would Sarah care?" "Probably not," I laughed. Sarah didn't seem to mind what I did. But she didn't treat me like I was a waste of time, like my mother always had. "Billie would get jealous. He would want to spend the night with Nona." I giggled. "What's your point? Do you want to come or not?" "Sure, why not?" he shrugged. He grabbed a change of clothes and a toothbrush. He shoved them into a backpack and informed Mike of where he was going. The two of us started on the voyage to Nona's house. We walked hand in hand under the streetlights. He laughed at me when I jumped as a cat scurried out from under a car. "That scared the shit out of me," I gasped. "No kidding," he laughed. "Shut up," I said, shoving him playfully. He smiled. "I really do love you, you know," he said. "And I love you, too." "Good to hear," he said, leaning on to me a little bit as we approached Nona's house. "I should've probably told you that while you spend the night here, we're not having sex." "What?" he asked, sounding surprised but not upset. "Nona gets mad if I listen to music after eleven because it keeps her up or whatever. I'm sure the sounds of people screwing would not be pleasant either," I said. "Fine," he groaned and I laughed. He was so weird sometimes.
THIRD PERSON PERSPECTIVE A woman grabbed her child and ran as Dave tumbled from the balcony above. And as soon as he was sure it was too late, he wondered if he had done the right thing. He didn't see his life flash before his eyes or anything, but he could only think of Chris and what her life would be like without him. "Chris!" he screamed as he hit the pavement below. Spectators gasped and flinched as the sound of his bones breaking practically echoed through the area. The police officers had broken into his room and were hovered on the balcony, looking down at the gory mess below them. So much for the problem with Dave Welsh.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 14:57:45 GMT -5
Ta da! I won't be able to update again until later tonight, though. That part kind of sucks and it took me forever to write. At that pace, I don't have time to write anymore.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 15:10:48 GMT -5
Well, it was okay. Leaves you hanging though. Dern cliffhangers.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 15:11:59 GMT -5
Me and my cliffhangers. I don't even do that on purpose anymore. It just happens. When I decide I can't think of more to write, I post it. And that's how they normally end. With a cliffhanger.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 15:15:44 GMT -5
Me too. Like my last chapter, it wasn't until I read over it did I realized I left a huge cliffhanger. My bad.
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 15:20:30 GMT -5
ewwww, the last part was kinda gross, but it was goooood, anyway please update
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 24, 2005 15:31:01 GMT -5
I have to go to youth group now (Sunday is a busy day), but when I get back I'll update my story and start a new one. Farewell all.
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Post by TABBY on Jul 24, 2005 15:32:23 GMT -5
cya
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 24, 2005 18:12:01 GMT -5
Uh....Bye. Be back soon!
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