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Post by TABBY on Jul 21, 2005 16:54:52 GMT -5
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG, anway PLEASE UPDATE!!! ;D
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 21, 2005 17:07:33 GMT -5
Finale PART FOUR I THINK MORGAN'S POINT OF VIEW "I'm not leaving." "What?" Billie asked. I had been standing by his car crying silently for the past several minutes, and since neither of us had said anything, I decided to break the silence. "If you're leaving right now, I'm not going," I repeated. "Why not?" he asked. "You're not going back in there, are you? Are you just going to let MTV take over your fucking life?" "No, I'm not going back in. But I have a chance to hang out with Dori and Tre and Karla and Mike and Jade and HJ. I don't want to pass that up. So if you want, you can leave. I'll just wait here. Dori will let me crash with her and Tre. I'll get a plane ticket and fly back to Oakland when I'm ready to leave," I whispered. "Babe," Billie sighed, getting out of the car and shutting the door. "I'm sorry. Look, if you want to stay, we'll stay." "Don't stay just for me," I said. "I wouldn't stay if I didn't think I'd have fun." "Yeah," I agreed. "Hey, you guys!" someone called. I turned around and there was Jade, running towards us. "Karla got arrested." "What?" Billie asked, almost laughing. "She beat up Suchin Pak, and now she's getting arrested." Jade had no sooner spoken those words that a police car drove by, with Karla sitting in the backseat and staring at us. "Holy shit," I whispered.
ONE WEEK LATER... REGULAR POINT OF VIEW "Thank you guys so much for letting us stay here," Morgan said, hugging me goodbye for the eight hundredth time. "Really." "Don't worry about it. You just have to promise that you'll come visit more often," I laughed. When I said this, Tre slipped his hand onto my back and pinched me. Okay, so Tre obviously didn't enjoy the company. "Okay," Billie said, picking up the suitcases. "Thanks, you guys. I had fun." "Me too," Tre said, and we waved goodbye for the last time as Morgan and Billie headed down the driveway to their car. After they had driven down the street and disappeared, I turned to Tre. "What, didn't you enjoy yourself?" "I did," he said, closing the front door. "It's just company gets old fast. I mean, you have to clean up after them and stuff like that." "You're just mad cause I wouldn't have sex with you while they were here," I said. "That too," he chuckled. "Want to make up for lost time?" I smiled and raised my eyebrows at him. He laughed.
JADE'S POINT OF VIEW "You are such a sweetheart," I said, throwing my arms around Jeremy's shoulders and giving him a kiss. "So you told me about 50 times," he laughed. "But what can I say? I couldn't just let them show that on TV." "I know Billie appreciates it," I said. "When I told him, the first thing he said was 'I'm so glad Jade has connections.' But can you imagine how much it would suck to not only relive one of the hardest things like a suicide attempt, but to know that there are thousands of people watching it?" "Which is exactly why I couldn't let them do it. I mean, even if it wasn't Billie and was just some guy I didn't know personally, I wouldn't have let them air it." "So, are they going to air any of the show that they filmed?" "Nope," Jeremy sighed. "There's not going to be any special on the lost season or whatever." "Good," I said. "Although I did enjoy watching the fun moments." "Like the hot tubbing?" he laughed. I elbowed him playfully. "Thanks again," I said. "No problem."
MIKE'S POINT OF VIEW "YOU ARE A LIFESAVER!" Karla screamed, running over to me. "A week in prison," she sighed as we walked through the parking lot. "Yeah," I said. "I would've gotten you out sooner, but your bail wasn't exactly cheap." "I know," she said. "But thanks so much. I love you." "I love you, too," I said. "Which is why we're getting married next month." "This is true," she giggled. "God, you have no idea how bad that jail was." "I can't believe you had to stay for a whole week," I laughed. "Me neither." There was a long silence as we climbed into the car. "Mike?" "Yeah?" I started the engine. "What are our plans for tonight?" "I don't know. Nothing yet. Why?" "Let's get married. Tonight," she said. "WHAT?!" "Let's go to Vegas or something. Get hitched all quick-like. No big deal." "Well..." "Come on. We haven't bought my dress or anything yet. We made reservations...nothing's paid for. Let's just do it," she begged. "You know what? Okay," I laughed. "Sounds like a plan."
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Post by TABBY on Jul 21, 2005 17:15:34 GMT -5
ohhhhhhhhhhh, lol " your just mad because i refused to have sex with ou while they were here" tre: " this is true", lol anyway PLEASE UPDATE!!! ;D
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 21, 2005 17:26:32 GMT -5
Well, I have to eat dinner, but after I eat I will be refueled, so I can go on a crazy updating spree. So be patient.
Oh, and if you're not happy with the way the finale's going, Morgan's writing another one! Yay!!! So I guess she'll post it when I'm done or something...
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 21, 2005 18:27:58 GMT -5
FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT!!!!! o0o0o0o0o0o0o, I liked that part.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 21, 2005 18:41:32 GMT -5
I'm glad you enjoyed it. But this part is really short and rather stupid. I hope I don't disappoint you.
Finale: PART WHATEVER THIS IS. I THINK IT'S FIVE KARLA'S POINT OF VIEW I felt like I was going to throw up. This wasn't the big church wedding I had planned on having all my life, but it would work. It kind of fit the relationship I had with Mike, which was spontaneous and very strange. But there I stood, in the house of some old couple (the dude was the preist and his wife played the organ and cried a lot) who married people all the time. I was wearing a pair of jeans and an AC/DC shirt. Not exactly proper wedding attire. But Mike didn't seem to care. "I do," I whispered, staring at Mike. "I now pronounce you husband and wife," the dude announced. "You may kiss the bride." I leaned into Mike's lips and kissed him more passionately than I ever had before. He was my husband. I was married. Just the thought made my heart jump.
TRE'S POINT OF VIEW "YOU DID WHAT?" I screamed into the phone. "I got married," Mike said again. "Karla and I just went off and got hitched. And I'm afraid." "Why?" I asked. Stupid question. There were so many times during Dori and my wedding that I had thought I was going to pass out or something. "I don't know," he said. "I just am. What should I do?" "Wait for the fear to go away, I guess. Once I got married, I wasn't scared. It was before I did that I was frightened." "Yeah," Mike sighed. "What's going on?" Dori asked, stepping into the kitchen where I stood. "You were yelling about something." "Don't tell her," Mike said. I guess he heard her voice. "Later," I whispered, covering the mouthpiece. She just nodded and headed into the living room. "Why can't I tell her?" "I don't know if Karla wants me telling people," Mike sighed. "I understand," I said. "But I have to go, okay? Call me and let me know how the honeymoon goes." "Shit," he whispered, but before I could ask what was wrong, he hung up. "So what happened?" Dori asked. "Mike and Karla got married." "Already?" she asked. "Yeah," I said, sitting next to her. "I guess Morgan and Billie will be next." "Or Jade and Jeremy," she added. "I guess," I said. "I guess we started a trend."
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Post by Kill on Jul 21, 2005 18:46:52 GMT -5
omg.
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 21, 2005 18:52:24 GMT -5
It wasn't stupid. It just leaves you hanging.
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Post by Kill on Jul 21, 2005 19:00:10 GMT -5
exactly! lol
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 21, 2005 19:04:51 GMT -5
Well, I'm glad you people think so.
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 21, 2005 19:24:31 GMT -5
Finale: PART SIX REGULAR POINT OF VIEW
SEVERAL MONTHS LATER... "Tre...." "Yeah, honey?" Tre sat in the living room, reading the newspaper and sort of watching a football game or something as I came hobbling down the stairs. "It's time." "Time for what?" he asked, looking at me over the paper. He saw me clutching at my stomach and instantly knew what it was time for. "Holy shit!" He sprinted up the stairs and back down in a few seconds, holding the suitcases we had packed for such occasion. He guided me out to the car and told me to "breathe like you ain't never breathed before" as he called my doctor on his cell phone. "How far apart are what?" Tre asked the doctor, and I suddenly felt like I was doomed.
MORGAN'S POINT OF VIEW "Shit," Billie whispered into the phone. "Hold on a second." He turned to me. "Morgan, how fast do you think we could get to Florida?" "Why?" I asked. "Dori's having the baby and Tre wants for us to be there." "I don't have to watch her having the baby, do I?" I asked, cringing a bit. "No," Billie sighed. "But Jade and Jeremy are coming down from New York, and Mike and Karla want to get to the hospital with us." "I'll have to call the airport. Do you think they'd give us a special discount cause we're going to a birth or something?" "I doubt it," Billie snorted. He went back to the phone. "Mike? I'll call you once I can get my hands on four plane tickets."
TRE'S POINT OF VIEW I couldn't feel my hand. I swear, that woman broke every bone in my hand. Dori was screaming all sorts of things at me, calling me "THE FUCKING BASTARD THAT PUT ME IN THIS POSITION" and all sorts of other things. She also told me that if I thought I was having sex with her ever again, I was sadly mistaken. The doctor just smiled at me and told me that it was just the pain. "Give her more pain killers," I insisted, since not only did I not want for her to be in pain, but I also didn't want to not have sex ever again. "Mr. Wright?" asked a nurse. "Yes?" "There's someone here to see you. Someone named Jade?" "Jade's here," I said to Dori. "I'm going to go say hi." "YOU LEAVE ME HERE AND I WILL TEAR YOUR ASS APART!" she screeched. "Can you tell her I'm busy?" I asked the nurse as Dori squeezed my hand even tighter. "Ow," I whispered. "Sure," the nurse said, retreating.
MIKE'S POINT OF VIEW "This is the longest flight I have ever been on," Morgan groaned, looking out the window. "That's only because you're in a hurry," Karla said. "Yeah, just think. When Karla has her baby, it won't be such a commute for you guys," I said. Karla practically punched me in the face when I said that. "Karla's having a baby?" Billie asked. "AWWWW!" Morgan groaned, then turned to Billie. "Dori's having a baby, Karla's having a baby...why aren't I having one?" "Because we're not married?" Billie suggested. "Why not?" asked Morgan. I turned and looked out the window as the two of them argued. I guess I should've paid attention because by the time they were done arguing, the two of them had decided they were going to get married. "So you're engaged now?" I asked as we got off the plane. "Yup," Morgan said, smiling.
JADE'S POINT OF VIEW "You must be Jade," said a woman who approached me in the waiting room. I sat next to Jeremy, waiting for word from the doctor. "Yes," I said. "And you are?" "Dori's mom. You can call me Bev," the woman said, extending her hand. "Nice to meet you. And congratulations on the grandchild." "Thank you," the woman said. A nurse then approached us. "Are you the family of Dori Wright?" she asked. "Yes," said Bev. "Well, it's twins," the nurse said. "TWINS?" I asked. "You didn't know?" Bev questioned, but the nurse continued. "A boy and a girl. The girl is Lainie Nicole and the boy is Frank Edwin IV." "How original," Jeremy mumbled sarcastically.
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Post by Kill on Jul 21, 2005 19:29:08 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! ANOTHER FRANK! This is so freaking wonderful!!! More. Now. lol
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Post by TABBY on Jul 21, 2005 19:33:06 GMT -5
omg omg omg, anyway please update ;D
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Post by makeshiftwings56 on Jul 21, 2005 19:40:17 GMT -5
Yay! More Franks! So cute....*wipes away imaginary tear* Touching.....
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Post by suicideXmakeover on Jul 21, 2005 19:44:09 GMT -5
Finale: THE LAST PART *tear* REGULAR POINT OF VIEW Holding two babies was pretty tricky, but somehow I managed it. In my arms I held my two babies. Tre pushed me in the wheelchair down the hallway to the waiting room, where my mother and Jade were. Tre said he had called Mike, so everyone else might be down in a few days or so. "I'm sorry," I said, looking up at Tre. "For what?" "For all the things I called you," I said. "Don't worry about it," he chuckled. "You made it up to me with these two." "So, we have little Frank and Lainie," I whispered, looking at the babies, with their little eyes squeezed shut. "They're so cute." "They look just like you," he said. "They look like you, too," I said. "They have your mouth." "They have your eyes," he said. "Yeah," I said. It wasn't a surprise that both babies had blue eyes and dark blonde hair, since those were traits that Tre and I both had. The doors opened and I was pushed into the waiting room, where my mother almost instantly scooped Frank out of my arms. Jade grabbed Lainie. "Let me know when I can have my children back," I said. "Oh my God!" Morgan said, sprinting into the waiting room. Like a parade, Billie, Karla and Mike filed in after her. They all ran over.
MORGAN'S POINT OF VIEW "They're adorable!" I squealed, grabbing the baby out of Jade's arms. "But why are there two?" "I had twins," Dori said. "I didn't know you were gonna have twins," Billie commented, walking over to Tre and patting him on the shoulder. Next thing I knew, Tre, Billie, Mike and Jeremy had gathered in a corner and were shooting the crap about something. "What's this one's name?" I asked. "Lainie," Dori said. "YOU NAMED THE BABY LAINIE?!" I asked, so excited. "I told you to name here that. Yay! You took my advice!" Dori laughed. "Well," I said. "You're going to have to help me name my baby." "Are you having one?" Dori asked. "Not currently," I laughed. "But soon, I think. Billie and I are getting married." "Morgan!' she squealed, pulling me into a hug, then snatching her baby from me. I laughed.
And it seemed like as soon as it had begun, so it ended.
AUTHOR'S NOTE I had so much fun writing this story. You don't even know the half of it. And I'm so sad to see it go. But it's not really going to go, since odds are Morgan and I will create several sequals/spin-offs. It'll be great. It's the story that never dies. Anyway, I'll probably work on another Tre and Vicky story (maybe...I might just let it end), but I'm going to work on my current "Coming Home Again" story. Anyway, let me know what you thought of Real World.
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